Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

This is a really nice poem, I liked it. They are so
pleasant to look at and I love their smell. As away you did an excellent job.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Thank you so much, Brooke :-)

Comment from Lokman

Excellent

And no kidding! Now I need to read that poem again, it's been far too long!

You have your own memorable lines in this poem, Brooke, that took my breath away.
gold-costumed gala
immortalized.

Beautiful!
Shea

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

Shea, thank you - this itty bitty 14 word poem took a couple of hours to write, and gold-costumed gala was the very last line that took forever. I so appreciate your commenting on it!! :-) Brooke

Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

What a lovely new word to add to a collection. "Daffadowndilly" Beautiful. And I truly enjoyed reading your notes. You're a font of interesting little tidbits aren't you, my poetic friend. Must be fun to have a coffee with you. I enjoyed your poem, along with the background info on it. Good fun.

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 Comment Written 07-Apr-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2009

I think it's a great word - you can't say it without smiling!
And I think Wordsworth's poem, about both nature and the power of imagination, is one of the grandest pieces ever penned. Thanks so much, Brooke :-)