Comment from rama devi

Excellent

A wonderful visual metaphor for the new year sesaon. I love that word Phantasmagoria. Very aptly applied in this delightful little write. Love the photo!

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Happy new year -and each new moment in the eternal now!

Love, rama devi

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2008

rama devi - I love that word too - some words were invented just to be used in a poem! thank you, Brooke

Comment from debskatz

Excellent

Hi Brooke,

I really like cinquains & I really like this one! Hope and positive thinking is what we need to start this year off with.

I also really like that word, "phantasmagoria." I know I've heard it before & when you mentioned Disney, I figured it must be something from him.

Thank you for sharing your vision of hope for the new year!

smiles,

deb

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 Comment Written 30-Dec-2008

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2008

Deb, thank you - I figure after my downer poems about apathy and war, it was time for something positive, Brooke

reply by debskatz on 30-Dec-2008

Yeah, I hope you're feeling better. Your last war poem inspired my war poem. But I'm hoping to find a better topic now. But at the moment, my muse is taking a break!

Keep thinking positive!

smiles,

deb

reply by the author on 30-Dec-2008

my muse has had several breaks this week!! :-)