Twilight Glow
Tropical relaxation6 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello!
Your Tyburn poem is well-crafted and it affords the reader beautiful visual imagery. I love these structured formats as they are so challenging to the poet in terms of creativity and message. You accomplish both very well.
Best Wishes,
diane
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Hello!
Your Tyburn poem is well-crafted and it affords the reader beautiful visual imagery. I love these structured formats as they are so challenging to the poet in terms of creativity and message. You accomplish both very well.
Best Wishes,
diane
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you for your review and great comments. Regards.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Tyburne Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery as well.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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This is a Tyburne Contest Entree rich in Theme and imagery as well.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content and Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review.
Comment from rama devi
I'm not a fan of the tyburn form but you've written a serene and lovely one that actually sounds like what it describes. Well done! The alliteration of T and consonance of L and N plus both alliteration and consonance of S all sound great read aloud. The rhythmic lull of the waves echoes in your poem.
Warmly, rd
PS Good luck!
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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I'm not a fan of the tyburn form but you've written a serene and lovely one that actually sounds like what it describes. Well done! The alliteration of T and consonance of L and N plus both alliteration and consonance of S all sound great read aloud. The rhythmic lull of the waves echoes in your poem.
Warmly, rd
PS Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you very much for your good review and comments.
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:-))
Comment from Bill Schott
This tyburn, Twilight Glow, has the correct framework and sets a soft, romantic mood, seaside, for a couple to relax and enjoy themselves. Nice.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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This tyburn, Twilight Glow, has the correct framework and sets a soft, romantic mood, seaside, for a couple to relax and enjoy themselves. Nice.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review and comments.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'Tyburn Poetry' writing prompt.
Well written and a clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Tyburn Poetry' writing prompt.
Well written and a clear message.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Tyburn poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. I really like the picture of the tiki hut and the way it makes a person feel when they look at it! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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This is a very well written Tyburn poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the art work. I really like the picture of the tiki hut and the way it makes a person feel when they look at it! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 29-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much Teri7!
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Thanks so much Teri7!