Summer Rain
Nourishing a new sprouting plant5 total reviews
Comment from damommy
Oh, I like this very much.
It's almost like a small child playing in the rain.
Good imagery with words only. Photo is a bonus.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
Oh, I like this very much.
It's almost like a small child playing in the rain.
Good imagery with words only. Photo is a bonus.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks for your read and your comments.
Comment from smreel
I like how the thunder clash seems to awaken the seedling like a summer alarm clock and the leaves are personified as arms. Good job with the 5-7-5. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
I like how the thunder clash seems to awaken the seedling like a summer alarm clock and the leaves are personified as arms. Good job with the 5-7-5. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thank you for your read and the comment.
Comment from GoodHearted Woman
Seedling awakens, arms out clinched it for me. So original I felt.
excellent photo depicting spring. Good luck in the contest.
Good
Hearted
Woman
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
Seedling awakens, arms out clinched it for me. So original I felt.
excellent photo depicting spring. Good luck in the contest.
Good
Hearted
Woman
Comment Written 02-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the read. I know would have liked to use spring but not enough syllables.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an awesome contest entry. Good job with the prompt--all syllables are correct per line. Your topic is well expressed & refreshing, too.
Good job & best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
This is an awesome contest entry. Good job with the prompt--all syllables are correct per line. Your topic is well expressed & refreshing, too.
Good job & best wishes in the contest.
Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the review and the encouragement.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the 5-7-5 contest
with exact syllables at the form
Excellent imagery in the thunder/seedling
with good alliteration of "s" sounds
This is a little more like spring with the seedling
but it can work for summer, too
Perfect picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
This is a fine entry for the 5-7-5 contest
with exact syllables at the form
Excellent imagery in the thunder/seedling
with good alliteration of "s" sounds
This is a little more like spring with the seedling
but it can work for summer, too
Perfect picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 01-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the read and the comments. Yes, I thought about spring but it is only one syllable.