heart whispers
a senryu3 total reviews
Comment from winnona
a beautifully written contest entry. You have captured the feel of a grandmother's love in a few short lines. I think you completed the contest very well. Good luck.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
a beautifully written contest entry. You have captured the feel of a grandmother's love in a few short lines. I think you completed the contest very well. Good luck.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the review, cheers, j
Comment from Sis Cat
Wow, wow,wow! This is a great senryu that speaks of a grandmother's love for the son of her son. Your poem is simple, comforting, and heartfelt. It made me think of my own grandmothers. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
Wow, wow,wow! This is a great senryu that speaks of a grandmother's love for the son of her son. Your poem is simple, comforting, and heartfelt. It made me think of my own grandmothers. Thank you for sharing. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review. I love that pure, true love when they connect with their precious grandchildren. Have a great week end, cheers j
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Heart Whispers, uses the proper syllable count and brings the image of maternal love to the fore. As a grandparent I can only be amazed at the joy I receive from my kid's kids. Nice.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
This senryu, Heart Whispers, uses the proper syllable count and brings the image of maternal love to the fore. As a grandparent I can only be amazed at the joy I receive from my kid's kids. Nice.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the insightful review Bill. That pure joy in the Grandparent's eyes when they hug those kids is true love. Bless you and the children. Cheers, j