The Bunny at the Bank
Haibun26 total reviews
Comment from gypsymoth
Nicely done. You never know these days who you can trust.
She may have been there watching who had the most lettuce stashed. There's an abundance of bunnies where I live too.
Someone told me every seven years or so rabbits get some
kind of malady that kills them off. Then , by seven years,
the cycle repeats. There's a lot to be said about seven year cycles.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Nicely done. You never know these days who you can trust.
She may have been there watching who had the most lettuce stashed. There's an abundance of bunnies where I live too.
Someone told me every seven years or so rabbits get some
kind of malady that kills them off. Then , by seven years,
the cycle repeats. There's a lot to be said about seven year cycles.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I did not know about the seven year cycle for rabbits. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
You did a beautiful job with this Haibun. The prose is just so serene and uplifting leaving the reader with a big bunny smile. The closing 5-7-5 sums it all up wonderfully. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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You did a beautiful job with this Haibun. The prose is just so serene and uplifting leaving the reader with a big bunny smile. The closing 5-7-5 sums it all up wonderfully. Nicely done and I thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks for a thoughtful review. Elaine
Comment from Eric1
Hi mermaids, this is a wonderful tale you have given us here my friend, how many towns these days can boast a rabbit as a resident, thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Hi mermaids, this is a wonderful tale you have given us here my friend, how many towns these days can boast a rabbit as a resident, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Jean Lutz
Such a comfort to read -- when all we hear is economic doom. It looks like the editor was messing with your message. If you edit by hitting enter to add a couple of lines of white space after your prose it should line the haiku right.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Such a comfort to read -- when all we hear is economic doom. It looks like the editor was messing with your message. If you edit by hitting enter to add a couple of lines of white space after your prose it should line the haiku right.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Ben Colder
It is for sure there is a shortage of coyotes, Bob Cats, and foxes there if the bunnies are plentiful. Even the eagles must be short. Thanks for sharing. Shalom.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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It is for sure there is a shortage of coyotes, Bob Cats, and foxes there if the bunnies are plentiful. Even the eagles must be short. Thanks for sharing. Shalom.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Thanks for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from drivenbackward
Cape Cod? Nice. Been to Martha's Vineyard, but not Cape Cod (yet). An interesting story with a good meaning.
Bouncing,baby bunny hops past the front door of the financial institution -- No comma.
lawn mower -- One word.
She is tiny and perfectly formed,long ears and poofy cottontail. -- Need space after comma.
My funds maybe -- My funds may be low
nature comes to us -- Nature
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Cape Cod? Nice. Been to Martha's Vineyard, but not Cape Cod (yet). An interesting story with a good meaning.
Bouncing,baby bunny hops past the front door of the financial institution -- No comma.
lawn mower -- One word.
She is tiny and perfectly formed,long ears and poofy cottontail. -- Need space after comma.
My funds maybe -- My funds may be low
nature comes to us -- Nature
Comment Written 22-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Thanks for the helpful suggestions and encouraging review. Elaine
Comment from JM
I feel sad for the wild animals who are running out of habitats due to «progress». They are running out of wilderness. I like your reference to the bunny as «God's small soul.»
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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I feel sad for the wild animals who are running out of habitats due to «progress». They are running out of wilderness. I like your reference to the bunny as «God's small soul.»
Comment Written 18-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from lakeport
The bunny at the bank,indeed they are such beautiful creatures,so many animals have lost their safe heavens,
Thanks for sharing the story,God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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The bunny at the bank,indeed they are such beautiful creatures,so many animals have lost their safe heavens,
Thanks for sharing the story,God bless you.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Yes, animals are losing their homes. Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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you are welcome,Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment from rainwolf57
Thank you for sharing your experience. It made me stop and contemplate how simple life can be if only we allow it to be so. However, the bunny has just as many dangers to face. Nice job.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thank you for sharing your experience. It made me stop and contemplate how simple life can be if only we allow it to be so. However, the bunny has just as many dangers to face. Nice job.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Thanks for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Louise Michelle
What a charming little tale this is, and it's true. I love how you tried to get inside of the mind of the bunny, comparing it's concerns with yours. Very whimsical! Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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What a charming little tale this is, and it's true. I love how you tried to get inside of the mind of the bunny, comparing it's concerns with yours. Very whimsical! Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 18-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014
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Love your review. Thanks so much. Elaine