When I Found Love
Tis a romantic piece of my own poetry.2 total reviews
Comment from peggles
I like the sentiments expressed in this
Truly romantic story you love comes shinning through all this to stay together despite all the troubles is to be commended
I only have one small complaint
The whole piece was in one lump made it a little hard to follow if you break it up into paragraphs it it look better and not leave your reader out of breath
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I like the sentiments expressed in this
Truly romantic story you love comes shinning through all this to stay together despite all the troubles is to be commended
I only have one small complaint
The whole piece was in one lump made it a little hard to follow if you break it up into paragraphs it it look better and not leave your reader out of breath
Comment Written 07-Jul-2011
Comment from Chris Tee
Sorry I had to abandon the read because this is not in the required format.You will not shape in the contest.
Do not despair there is help on the way.
Let me try to help you.
It is a 5-7-5 Haiku format, Ok:
Example:
I love you so much = 5 syllables
My love for you is extreme = 7 syllables
Much is love for you = 5 syllables
Every = 2 syllables eve=1 ry=1 total = 2
Now do not give up go and edit it and I will re-review it for you. If you do not understand tell me in your reply Ok
Never quit ok
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Sorry I had to abandon the read because this is not in the required format.You will not shape in the contest.
Do not despair there is help on the way.
Let me try to help you.
It is a 5-7-5 Haiku format, Ok:
Example:
I love you so much = 5 syllables
My love for you is extreme = 7 syllables
Much is love for you = 5 syllables
Every = 2 syllables eve=1 ry=1 total = 2
Now do not give up go and edit it and I will re-review it for you. If you do not understand tell me in your reply Ok
Never quit ok
Comment Written 07-Jul-2011