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Lisalet

A chapter in the book Little Poems

Stormy Government Skies

by Treischel


Our Government remains beneath the stormy skies,
divided and ready to drastically explode.
The congressmen just seeking blameless alibis.
Constituents back home are ready to implode.

Divided and ready to drastically explode.
from promises that turn out to be bold-faced lies.
While compromise has not become an active mode,
our Government remains beneath the stormy skies.

The congressmen just seeking blameless alibis.
to distance them from those upon whose votes they rode.
Each side brews discontent with fruitless battle cries,
divided and ready to drastically explode.

Constituents back home are ready to implode,
observing gridlock each inaction exercise.
The failure in all the status-quo data showed
The congressmen just seeking blameless alibis.




The poetic premise remains true whether State or Federal Government.

I took this photo of the Capital of St. Paul one stormy day from a window in Region�¢??s Hospital. My wife was hospitalized 3 times within 5 months for heart problems, then pneumonia, and then sever back pain with a blood infection.

This poem is a Lisalet.
The Lisalet Poem:is a style created by Lisa Sherman on FanStory, that has a fixed format of repeating lines and, when rhymed, a forced set of only two rhyme choices in an abab rhyme scheme. The format repeats the first four lines in a structured reverse cascade down the stanzas follows:
1/2/3/4 - 2/5/6/1 - 3/7/8/2 - 4/9/10/3,
such that the stanzas incorporate the repeating lines as 1/2 - 2/1 - 3/2 - 4/3 as the first and last lines of each stanza. Note that while the lines repeat, the meanings transition to new or more deep detail.
The optional rhyme scheme becomes
A1,B1,A2,B2 - B1,a,b,A1 - A2,b,a,B2 - B2,a,b,A2.
The capitals represent the repeated lines. I hope that all makes sense. I chose the syllable count to be 8, but that is not a requirement.
The author took this photograph himself on August 29, 2018.
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