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A chapter in the book The Book of Fine Poetry

Candle of Me

by Ricky1024

"Candle of Me"
Written on August 13th, 2018
By Doctor Ricky 1024
Like a Ship without a Wind...
An Audience without Entertainers...
A Waxed Wick with no Flame?
Come with me as I now share my Name...
...
I am just me...
Nothing that special....
But, can you see?
Me...
...
Maybe...
You need more?
Okay...
"I'll try...
...
In 2000 and Three...
After the death of Two members of my Family...
Depression of Grief...
Unsatisfying moan...
Unending cry...
In 2000 and Three...
I died...
...
The World (for me)
Yes!
Died with Me?
I forgot I had FOUR DAUGHTERS!
Instead?
Four painful years until any form of relief...
For this LatterDay Saint Priest.
....
Like a Sinner with no Sin...
A Doctor with no Cure?
A Jockey with no Horse to Race?
Life for me has lost...
That Sweetness of Grace...
...

A Clock with no Hands....
A Car with no Fuel...
A Pen which ran out of Ink...
An Einstein whom no longer can Think?
...
Life wants more of Me but Lord God...
Can You no See?
I lost my only Son and Wife in 2000 and Three...
Approximate Word Count: 203.







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