General Poetry posted March 20, 2018


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A Cottage on the Hillside

by michaelcahill


A Cottage on the Hillside


Rain
drops dive
welcome cool
Hillside's rumble
Lovely scenic views
stumbling into motion
Nature's extinguishing all
dominion no longer questioned
Still, man sees Shangri La in the mud


 



Nonet Poetry Contest contest entry


Reverse has been okay in the past, not sure about now. This one has to be reversed, so come what may. :))

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