General Poetry posted February 3, 2018


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Tanka Poem

Tanka (my heart crumbles)

by PoemsOfDD

 

my heart crumbles 
like dried petals from a rose 
lost in the moment
I wait for time to help 
heal a bloom in me again


 




Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry


The Tanka form has five unrhymed lines often following a specific syllable count
of 5-7-5-7-7. However, this is not required but a helpful guide. A short-long-short-long-long structure or even just free form structure using five lines can be used. In this piece the is format of 4-7-5-6-7 (29 syllables).

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