General Poetry posted December 5, 2017


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Challenges come with advancing years

Major Service Required

by persevere

Some thousand miles upon its wheels
Age now it feels
Treads wearing thin
Lights rather dim

Our wheels are showing signs of wear
Needing repair
Eroding joints
Focusing points

Dressing now for comfort not style
It takes awhile
Dentures in place
Smile on the face

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