General Poetry posted December 3, 2017


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A short whimsical poem about an abused car.

Oh, what a ride!

by nomi338

I let my girl drive my Mercedes
It looked like it had been to Hades

Said, "Girl what did you do to my ride?"
Told me to shut up and get inside

Taking off at a hundred and five
Wondered if we would get home alive

She drove real fast every place we went
Don't even know how much time we spent

This girl drove my car with skill and pride
All I could say was "Oh, what a ride!"



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