General Poetry posted November 15, 2017


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A sea of blue danger

The liquid curtain

by DR DIP

THE LIQUID CURTAIN

I ride this liquid curtain of blue
My reflection in the wall
Every surfer tries to pursue
But not all surfers have the gall!

To ride this perfect barrel of death
This chasm of liquid perfection
It really takes away your breath
As you make the perfect selection

A Teahupoo tunnel of blue
A Tahitian wave of pride
Not every surfer knows how to
Really tame this ocean's slide

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This amazing hollow wave is a notorious spot in Tahiti it breaks 12 to 15ft on 2 feet of water and these surfers ride this with their hearts in their mouths.
Under the liquid curtain is an expression that surfers use to describe a pitching , tubing wave
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