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A chapter in the book Let's Laugh 5

The Neighbor's Surprise

by Barb Hensongispsaca

Brandon couldn't wait to get home to tell his mother about the new neighbors that moved in next door. To him, this was exciting news.

"Mommy! Mommy!" Brandon yelled as he ran through the front door.

"What is wrong, are you okay?" his mother asked.

"Oh, yes, Mommy!" he said, "I met the new neighbors and they have triplets!"

"How old are they?" his mother asked.

"I don't know all of them", he said proudly, "but one is my age!"

Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a complete story in 80 words or less.

The theme is 'Surprise.'

You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic.

80 words

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