General Fiction posted October 10, 2017


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Dribble Flash Fiction - 50 words

Frustrated

by miajaffri

The handle wouldn't turn. As hard as I tried, I couldn't get the door to open.

The child waiting screamed, "Push the door. Push. I gotta go."

"I am," I yelled.

Suddenly, the door opened wide as the boy peed on my left foot ruining my brand new
$100 shoes.



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