Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 4, 2017


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Terrified victims shot down at Las Vegas concert.

Everybody Run for Your Life

by Liberty Justice

Dodging flying bullets to keep on surviving.
Friends shot down in this hysterical crowd.
Enjoying musical concert, then we were diving.
Pop pop tat tat tat sounded terrifyingly loud.
Suddenly, mayhem as horrified people started running.
Jason Aldean ran off the stage, I knew it was time to go.
Stampeding screaming as madman came gunning.
Shots fired from window striking trapped victims below.


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My poem refers to the gunning down of innocent victims by a madman at the Las Vegas concert. At first, concert goers thought noises were fire crackers, but when the singer, Jason Aldean dropped his guitar and ran off the stage, horrified stunned party goers knew it was time to RUN FOR THEIR LIVES.
Definitely, this is why I don't do live concerts. I learned my lesson when gunman opened fire on concert goers in France or England this year. OMG this world and the good old USA are such dangerous places to live, making thousands of people scared to even leave their homes. MAY GOD, PLEASE BLESS AMERICA! AMEN
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