General Poetry posted July 28, 2017 Chapters:  ...17 18 -19- 20 


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minimalist free verse

A chapter in the book Patterns

Curvature

by estory

Around the curves of the circles
Of the wheels in the curves
Of the circles around the edges
Within the rims around the wheels
Around the circles of the curves
That curve into circles

The lines of the curves of circles
Of curves

The curves of the edges
Of circles

The circles around the circles

The curves of sounds around
The grooves of records
Playing music in circles
Stuck in the grooves
Of records

The orbits of the planets
In the curves of gravity
Around the spheres of stars
In the circles of galaxies

The points of lines bent into circles
Around the centers of points
In the centers of circles

Around curves around circles around

The center of circles
Circling the centers of curves
In the wheels of lines
Curving around

The curves of the rims
Of the circles of wheels
Around the circles of curves

Of circles of circles of circles






This poem is made up out of the music of 'r' and 's' sounds repeating in a dense pattern, looping around each other, intertwining, like a celtic emblem. I threw in little well known images; the round records we played when we were kids,, the wheels of cars, the planets going around and around in their orbits. It was a fun poem to write, and I hope, fun to read as well, a new kind of explosion of poetic sound estory
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