General Poetry posted July 24, 2017 Chapters:  ...13 14 -15- 16... 


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...my first Bookend Monorhyme

A chapter in the book 2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Bernie and Howie; Bookends

by Mustang Patty

Bernie, my knight
Howie, the right
 
Two furry and funny dogs, run fast to see
which one of them gets the squirrel in the tree
the leash is held onto by little ole me
The squirrel scurries on, too fast for us three
 
Leashes held tight
Knuckles so white



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This is my first attempt at this poetic form - please be kind and constructive in your criticism.

Apparently, there will be a new Bernie and Howie story tomorrow; the boys informed me that a poem is NOT enough tribute.


Bookend Monorhyme

In the spirit of the Pantygynt, the Sapphonic Triad, the Sonnetino, and the Lyricat; I'd like to introduce you to another new style. Bookend Monorhyme is an awesome form created by our fellow FanStorian, BeasPeas.

Here is the form described in her own words:

This is a Bookend Monorhyme poem, a form I created in 2016 by accident when I wrote two poems on the same topic and liked them both so I combined them into one. It consists of a 4-syllable line monorhyme and an 11-syllable line monorhyme. The two poems should be able to stand alone, but relate to each other in some way. Thank you to Jannypan for naming this form.

2 lines - 4 syllables
4 lines - 11 syllables
2 lines - 4 syllables
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