General Poetry posted June 29, 2017


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A Cuarderna Via poem - see notes below

Repressed Emotions

by tfawcus

I canter towards the dark; then come lamely home again,
These forays are all false starts; my intentions are in vain,
I'm led headlong by a heart that's perverted by my brain,
Though virgin ground is tempting, I shall never leave a stain.

My life is bound by caution, I would toss it to the wind,
With hesitating footsteps, I have sometimes almost sinned,
Restrained by learnt convention, I am like an insect pinned,
A museum specimen, become frail and brittle-skinned.

Yet still there lurks a notion, when I view dark stars that gleam;
Beyond childhood repression, subliminal cravings seem
To erect realities - no longer constrained by dream.
How the joys of life do melt. Mr. Whippy rings. I scream.



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Cuaderna Via (frame way) is a strict, syllabic stanzaic form that dominated most of the serious Spanish poetry for the 13th and 14th centuries until the 15th. The Cuaderna Via introduced syllabic verse into Castillian poetry.
One of the earliest known Spanish poets to utilize the form was Gonzalo de Berceo 1190-1264.

This stanzaic form is known for its rigidity of form: syllables are counted carefully. In addition to the rigid meter, only true rhyme is allowed. The defining features of the Cuaderna Via are:
stanzaic, written in any number of mono-rhymed quatrains.
syllabic, 14 syllable lines divided into hemistiches of 7 syllables each, often broken by caesura. There is no wiggle room in syllable count.
mono-rhymed. The rhyme must be true rhyme, no slant rhyme, assonance or consonance.
Rhyme scheme aaaa, bbbb etc.

Some might contend that 'again' is not a true rhyme, but in the part of the world I come from it is pronounced 'a gain'.

Glossary note: Mr Whippy was - and perhaps still is - a popular vendor of soft-serve ice-cream.

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