General Poetry posted April 15, 2017


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5-8-4 haiku

haiku (kids watermelon)

by IndianaIrish



kids watermelon
seed-spitting match at school picnic
teacher joins in


 



Haiku Poetry Contest contest entry

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watermelon is a seasonal word (kigo) for summer

Just a note...haiku doesn't have to be strictly about just nature. There are ones that refer to cultural observances ( religious or state or both). These are called gyoji haiku. There are ones that refer to lifestyle. This includes work and play. These are called seikatsu. (this is the haiku I wrote) There is also a combination of gyoji and seikatsu called jinji, which refers to the gamut of human affairs.
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