General Poetry posted March 10, 2017


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a modern tanka about moving

Tanka (life packed in boxes)




Life packed in boxes

ready to move but waiting—


compartmentalized
 
existence exasperates 
 
and smothers my gypsy soul.
 








 



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I am in the process of moving and at the present time, I am surrounded by piles of boxes... it's frustrating. :/

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