Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted February 14, 2017


Excellent
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An olfactory favourite

Perfumed presence

by persevere

In my life I've reached the stage
Where make-up is not all the rage
I find my husband more attracted
To a perfume I've selected

A mix of fragrances it is
Of my liking and of his
Blackcurrant, lemon and bergamot
Lilly of the valley, just a dot

A delicate spray that lasts all day
It is certainly worth the price I pay
It makes me feel a lady of note
So it gets my favourite vote



An object writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about any object which you love the most let it be perfume,books,etc.


Thanks to avmurray for enhancing my poem.
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Artwork by avmurray at FanArtReview.com

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