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A Complex Alliterisen

A chapter in the book Luna's Form Poetry

Fanciful Fairies

by Luna


To you, Mickey, from Momma
animated fairies photo: flower angel 2ANGELINFLOW.gif

A dozen demure fairies flying
'round moon most misty nights, singing and laughing.
All alight on a fair flower,
Some sit for hours happily daydreaming,
listening lightly to wild wind.
You yearn to meet the fae folk this night ~
Shhhh! Sleep soundly now and dream deeply.



Recognized


The Alliterisen (Complex and Rhyming), a form created by Udit Bhatia, is a simple seven-lined poem with a specific syllable pattern and two alliterations per line. For example: Glorious Graves, and wonderful waves. Alliteration is the succession of similar consonant sounds. They are not recognized by spelling, but rather by sounds. The syllable structure for the Complex Alliterisen is as follows: (I chose sequence 2 for this poem)

1st line- x syllables
2nd line- x+2 syllables
3rd line- x-1 syllables
4th line- (x+2)-1 syllables
5th line- x-2 syllables
6th line- (x+2)-2 syllables
7th line- x syllables

which allows for infinite syllable sequences. Listed below are examples of some easy syllable sequences.

Sequence #1:

1st line- 8 syllables
2nd line- 10 syllables
3rd line- 7 syllables
4th line- 9 syllables
5th line- 6 syllables
6th line- 8 syllables
7th line- 8 syllables (same as first)

Sequence #2:

1st line- 9 syllables
2nd line- 11 syllables
3rd line- 8 syllables
4th line- 10 syllables
5th line- 7 syllables
6th line- 9 syllables
7th line- 9 syllables (same as first)
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