Humor Poetry posted January 21, 2017


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Patience has its limits. (Especially for the elderly.)

Timothy and Marylyne in Love's Embra

by Ogden


REPETITION POEM (Must repeat a line three times)
Timothy and Marylyne in Love's Embrace

I will love you, Marylyne, until the end of time.
I'm sorry dear, you have your thumb in my ear, and I didn't hear.

That's your hearing aid, not my thumb; have you been tippling the rum?
What were you whispering in my ear, dear, that I didn't hear?

"I will love you, Marylyne, until the end of time!"
I still can't hear you, Timothy; be patient with me.

"I will love you, Marylyne. Until.....The End of Time!"
Whaaat?!! (HICCUP!)    
Time's up!!
 

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Repetition Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem where the same line is repeated at least three times in the poem.
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