please click here for information on the haiku club challenge
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basic reviewing guidelines for folks who find it difficult =

--satori= the last line should give you an insight to the previous phrase (line 1 and 2)

--kigo=is a word that makes you think of one of the four seasons

Japanese Kigo Dictionary

--feelings=what kind of emotions does the haiku bring for you?

--five senses= what senses do you recall when you read the haiku?(see, hear, smell, touch, taste)

--presentation= is it attractive? easy to read?

--grammatical connection= line one and two should flow smoothly and grammatically connected. A haiku should not read like a sentence. Haiku are not greeting cards.

--word economy= only words you need should be used without
sacrificing the meaning

If you have any questions about my haiku, please ask me.

KIGO= WINTER--BIRDS
CROWS AND RAVENS (kangarasu) late winter

Yata-Garasu-- The Ravens of Japanese Myth

click here to read Japanese Raven Mythology


Thank you for reading,

Gypsy Sensei