General Poetry posted September 23, 2016


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Her first drink in a bar

Suspicious

by Ogden


These are the words of the BARTENDER. You can guess what the young lady says.
It's free.
Yes, on the house.
That means the drink's on me.
Don't look a gift horse in the mouth!
On second thought, can I see your ID?

Okay, you're old enough, I see.
Yes, the drink's still on me.
Stop bugging me!
It's free!!!!

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