General Poetry posted May 21, 2016


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Let Fire Sleep

by michaelcahill



Satisfaction smiles
as a single ember burns
smoldering alone
 
a fool stands holding
a prod in a dry forest
coaxing an ash
 
do you like anger
then poke at me … a bit more
the forest's ablaze!









 



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