Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 12, 2016


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A Triolet Entry

Free Me

by Douglas Paul

 
Free me, shadow, let me go--
Let the light shine on my soul,
bringing peace that I would know.
Free me, shadow, let me go--
You have nothing to bestow.
I seek light to make me whole.
Free me, shadow, let me go--
Let the light shine on my soul.

  


Triolet Poetry contest entry

Recognized


First try on this format - be nice lol

7 syllables per line
meter is Dum-da- Dum-da- Dum-da- Dum
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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