General Poetry posted December 20, 2015


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They continue to die

Cold Evil Murder

by Jaxpoet

Sad Poems Contest Winner 

The author has placed a warning on this post for violence.
She was only twenty
and running for her life
From fanatic fools with horrid tools
Who lived beneath the knife

She held her baby tightly
Her heart was full of fear
The hooded thug was gaining ground
And getting very near

He hit her on the shoulder
And drove her to the dirt
The evil thug with one quick tug
Tore off her long cut skirt


He had his way --'twas Childs play
For this hooded evil brute
The young girl just lay crying
As he drew his gun to shoot

So two more die and many cry
In this land so far away
Its best you wake -- the threat's not fake
They are coming here one day


Writing Prompt
Sadness has overcome us all at one time or another. Either caused by a relative or close friend's death or from the girl or guy that broke our heart or just life in general. We all handle situations differently, some good, some bad. This contest gives us the ability to explore this. Your poem can also play into other emotions that are common to writing like this such as anger or depression.

Sad Poems
Contest Winner

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The prompt said ANGER this drives anger in the saddest way
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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