Romance Poetry posted October 13, 2015 Chapters:  ...20 21 -22- 23... 


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A chapter in the book Short Form Poetry

Class of '70

by michaelcahill


 
sweet innocence--
first loves share trembling kiss

frozen in time

nervous reunion for two
sweet innocence shivers--then warms




 



Tanka Poetry Contest contest entry

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It isn't a requirement to follow the 5-7-5-7-7 syllable count.
Mine is 4-6-4-7-8. Total=29 syllables.

I happen to like a pretty picture and a nice display. If you find it objectionable, feel free to pass it by. :))


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