General Poetry posted March 24, 2015


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A poet's nightmare.

Cringe....

by royowen

I post a work and then I cringe,
think, "Will they write critiques that singe"?
or will they praise with tender strokes-
or quench the flame with wetted pokes?

But I must write, I'm driven, man,
a made up muse, some clever plan,
yet, I just sit here, pen in hand,
discarded like an old hat stand.

A writer paints with coloured word,
creating scenes not weird, absurd,
a landscape bright, a deep, deep thought,
a memory sparked, or beauty brought.

If I don't write, they can't touch me,
won't criticize, they'll let me be,
but thrills I seek, how can they know?
I'm just a fool, it's only show.



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Some critiques really hurt, but we must learn to take it on the chin, they can be very helpful, I think we "arty" people, tend to be over sensitive, but still I have a consuming desire to write, and what's the use if we don't share our thoughts with others! I rarely have absolutely nothing to write about, there's so many subjects flying around in the "ether".This offering you may or not like, it's really up to you.
I'm reluctant to call myself "poet" that's for others to decide!
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