General Fiction posted December 18, 2014


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100 words on a first kiss with a stranger

Butterflies

by giraffmang

The room is spinning as he draws near. I am light-headed, dizzy, giddy perhaps. It is as if I am frozen to the spot and am powerless to resist. It's hard to focus. He bends forward, so close that I can feel his stubble caressing my chin. I have never felt like this before. Kissed most certainly but not like this. His lips are on mine now, pushing hard and rough. I am shocked to find that I enjoy it. I wonder will this be the last man I ever kiss?


Butterflies in my stomach.


As the knife cuts deep.



100 Word Dash writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Topic: A first kiss between strangers.

Let's take flash fiction to the extreme. Can you tell a complete story with just 100 words. If so this is your opportunity to shine.



100 words exactly. (Microsoft word count and manual!)
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