Self Improvement Poetry posted December 18, 2014


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Why am I so fat?

Portly Parallels

by Dean Kuch

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~Portly Parallels~



 

Who's this portly impostor staring back at me?

Isn't svelte, light, and trim what she so wants to be?

My advantage is knowing what she truly is;

a cow – so hefty – not a skinny girl like this.


 

I'm permitted no suffrage, I've no say in this,

she mimics me boldly displaying baleful bliss.

Just a duped likeness of woeful self-destruction;

plump carbon copy, one of my own construction.


 

This replication is such suety travesty.

A cunning caricature, what vile witchery!

Everytime I see her, I ask – “Just who are you?

Don't you mind the fat, is there nothing you can do?”

 

No sympathy from this chubby imitation;

none is forthcoming, as all her limitations

are wholly dependent on all I do and say –

her deception seems to work much better this way.




 

I'll lose this weight if I have to die to do it!

I'll eat – then I'll purge – just to help me get through it.

Friends claim I'm too bony, so skeletal, they say.

I view my reflection but don't see it that way.





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Writing Prompt
We look in the mirror everyday. What do we see when we see ourselves? Write a poem about what you see when you look in the mirror. It can be as straightforward or abstract as you'd like. Creative responses and free-form poems are encouraged.

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Anorexia and Bulimia are horrid diseases that rob individuals of their self-confidence and self esteem, often tricking them into believing something something that just isn't factual, and blinding them from realizing a simple truth...

We are all uniquely made and beautiful just the way we are.

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