Spiritual Poetry posted November 17, 2014


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Yes, I will share your grief

Truer Days

by LoannaLois

Yes, I hear it too.
The silence fills our souls
with sounds of the unknown.

I too see the fading light
where once it beckoned sweet with dawn
this kinder light that tiptoes through the window
for it knows
that no amount of sun that shines
can warm these frozen tears;
not yours...not mine.

I will be here tomorrow.
I will be here by your fire.
We will hug the dogs and memories
and endure
for now; for we
know truer days will follow.

We know this
for our God
who brings tomorrow
shares our fire.



Empathy with Grief writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any style that shows empathy for the grief of another human being. There are no line length requirements.

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This is dedicated to my dear friend, Cindy, who leads our "Whole Again" group at church...for those who have lost.
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