Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 1, 2014


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Where lies the blame?

by DALLAS01

You stole my man away from me
I've wracked my brain, how can that be?
He took a vow long time ago
To stand by me and not let go,
You surely used an evil spell
For that I hope you go to hell.

Retort
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This picture that you choose to paint
Of me the sinner you the saint,
Relieves you not your share of blame
For prepping him to be fair game;
You served him on a silver platter
Convinced him that he didn't matter.

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Fiction for Fun - J'accuse writing prompt entry
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Write a six line poem accusing someone.
Then write a six line poem, responding.
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