Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 30, 2014


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Sedoka

Snowfall

by michaelcahill

Sedoka Poem Contest Winner 
 

Snowfall
 

beautiful image
individual angels
window painting in motion
 

freezing sharp needles
like holiday coffin nails
pierce my homeless existence





 




 

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Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.
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