Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted October 23, 2014


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The lonlliness of alcoholism.

last man standing

by DALLAS01

Memories of little consequence
Spilling out of amber liquid,
Seeking their bottom
Find my bottom.
A
Weak foundation
hammered on a hollow soul
Crumbles around me,
As I crawl through
The empty dust.

A majority of one
In the deafening silence-
Last man standing.

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Lonely Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines.


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