General Poetry posted October 23, 2014


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So Lonely I . . .

by RodG

Desolate
I slither through
the cheerless
day
like an ice-locked stream
past
wind-stripped trees
and drifts
of
shadow-dappled snow
toward
tomorrow's
still
dark
pond



Lonely Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines.

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"Winter Brook," painted by Charles Vickery, courtesy of Google images.

I have tried to imagine someone so lonely and forlorn he might be pondering self-destruction.
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