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Category: Horror and Thriller Fiction
Posted: October 18, 2014 Views: 15
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A story about a family of vampires and the Bubonic Plague!
"Three of Four Can't Be All That Bad?" By Ricky1024
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<><><><><><>> A Slam-Poet and Master Writer of All, Writing Venues"<><><><><><>
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"The vampire family {Bloodiness} was are still are descendant's of the "Count
Dracula!'
The with in Transylvania, Romania out side the wooded 'Black Forest!'
And this is where this amazing tale begins!'
...
"The fourteenth century had just tuned and the onslaught of the dreaded bubonic pleased had been wrecking havoc on Europe!
It had just entered Romania and they already have over one hundred deaths!
...
"Dreaded Rats! Vampire la Complained!
"Never again will I be so low...
"So,, hungry...
"To suck the blood of a rat again!"
She Complained!
"It's Ok sis, I got this!"
"I must insist!!!
"Just carry a blade like me and when you see one of those disgusting suckers, wack off it's damned HEAD!!!
Ok, I will Samantha and thank you for that."
...
"Sis?
"Yes Count Ivan?"
"Will you hack off my head too if I suck a rats blood? I'm so hungry!!!
"Don't bore ridicules Ivan I will only kill dirty rats!"
"Ok, Thanks Vampire la".
...
"As light approaches, {Vampires seek more calm and dark places to rest.}
{Vampire la enters her coffin in the back of the lair and after an hours rest she is rudely and painfully awakened!}
...
"Ouch!"
"Damn it!"
"What was that!" She complains and wonders!
"A damned, dirty, rat!"
"Dad can you hear me?"
"Yes Daughter, What is it now!"
"You hungry again?"
"No, I was bitten!"
"By what Daughter?"
"I think it is a rat but not sure?"
"Wait till tomorrow evening and then see!"
"Don't leave your lair and coffin till the sun sets!"
"Yes daddy."
...
"At 6;00 PM. She awakens to check on the bite!
And there beside her a sleep is that dreaded rat!
She yells!"
...
"Kill it! Yells Samantha!"
{Vampire la stamps on it and all that is left is a pile of crimson and gore under her stiletto!}
"Good job sis, You'll be alright".
"It's rare to be bitten by a diseased rat!"
"And vampires have better resistant properties then humans!"
Samantha replies."
...
"The Winter comes and goes and the whole family is looking forward to an early Spring.
{This is the time of the year when humans venture outside!}
...
"Vamipella, You coming?"
"It is hunting time and we are all hungry!" Asks Ivan.
"Nah, I'm a little tired and queasy."
"I think I will stay in this time but thanks Ivan."
...
"{The next two weeks saw Vamiperlla staying home more...
Sleeping more...
And losing a lot of weight!}"
...
"Sis, Are you Ok?'
"You look a little weak and your colour is doff to sis!"
"Thanks Samantha but you know me when it comes to colds!" She replies.
"I think you got something worse, much worse sis..
"I insist that you see a doctor, a cold Doctor."
"I'ill check with dad, he know everything."
"Ok?
"Yes, that will be good...
"Having a hard time kicking this...
"Whatever."
...
"The Doctor Dr. Ricky 1024, discovered that she has a deadly infection! The 'Dreaded Bubonic Plague!'
So, He trey's remedies like bat wing and warlock breath...
Toad and eye of newt..
And even a blood transfusion with a matching, human, donor but...
...
"Vamipella, How are you feeling today?" Samantha asks.
{The doctor questions her}.
Yes, how are you today dear?
"A little better."
"I think the blood
"Are you sleeping and eating any better, dear?"
Yes, I think."
"Transfusion are helping". She relies."
...
"The very next day, Samantha goes to Vapmirella's coffin to check on her like she has been doing since her sis first got sick and saw...
"Oh my God!!!
"Oh, My FUCKI***GOD!"
...
"Vamipella, the oldest and most beautiful daughter to 'Count Dracula.'
Had passed away that night from the plague.
She was only 24."
The End.



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Special thanks goes out first to Heavenly Father and His Son Jesus Christ, then Fan Story and Tom the administrator, Fan Art Review and this amazing artist and my friend 'MK Flood' and his pic '3 Out of 4 Vampires.'

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