General Poetry posted September 2, 2014


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Tanka 5-7-5-7-7 So High

by LoannaLois

The mountains so high

seem to reach out to heaven

as my heart looks up

and wishes I too could reach

out to that which is beyond.



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This is dedicated to my husband of 42 years who died 5 years ago, today.
So many questions...so many tears...so many memories.
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