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 General Poetry posted July 30, 2014


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a mother and her child

sedoka-Baby Cries

by magic dragon

Opening his eyes
tears falling, as the baby
cries for his mother to come.

In her gentle arms
baby giggles heard, as she
comforts, feeling only love.



Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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