Satire Poetry posted June 17, 2014


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senryu-- double meaning--see author notes

senryu (I no longer)

by dejohnsrld (Debbie)


I no longer
insert foot in mouth, now settle
for just a shoe
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As an amputee, I always have an extra left shoe around, this is a thought of what to use them for.

senryu are ironic, satiric and 17 syllables or LESS

Thanks to Estelle454 for the artwork

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