Spiritual Poetry posted May 24, 2014 Chapters: 2 3 -4- 5... 


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Trinet

A chapter in the book Shepherd

Not

by w.j.debi

 
Not mine
But thine
The Savior said on bended knee
As he prayed there in Gethsemane
Father, let
This bitter
Cup pass


Not sweat
But blood
Flowed forth from every tortured pore
Such sorrow and agony he bore
Thy will
Oh, Father,
Be done


Not pride
But humility
Won eternal life and the victory
Father, let my prayer also be
Thy will
Not mine
Be done
 

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I missed the contest, but wanted to try this form since it is new to me.

A Trinet is a verse of three stanzas. Each stanza is made of seven lines with the following configuration:
2 words
2 words
6 words
6 words
2 words
2 words
2 words



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