Satire Poetry posted February 27, 2014


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senryu

Senryu (clutching her chest)

by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

clutching her chest
with a deep sigh she felt
a heart attract

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Thanks to Angelheart for the 'heartwork'

senryu--a three line Japanese form with 17 syllables OR less
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