General Poetry posted February 3, 2014


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Delutional fantasies of a rejected soul.

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by Gabriels

Can't I bring heaven down?
Raise the tempo of my heart beat?
Where's the cold cold midas touch?
That would counter the heat burning me within
Can the melody of the drums
Make me tingle and wriggle till i go numb?

I Wanna see you work over me like fine pottery
keep me hanging at the edges of my desire
Take me to the cleft of passion
where my naive heart crave and long to be
where men say heaven reside

I wonder baby if you can
Open forth those secrets with your touch
Explore them with your lips on my skin
Kill the boredom of empty promises
Don't just talk the talk

If i could never have you
Then let life itself go
Did i come so deep?
Blame the pain that draws me to its valley
like quicksand i sink like am falling through space

If home is not with you
then let me journey go beyond and forget
I love my life but i don't love its taste:
bitter sweet
fairer dark
joyful pain
every single vein constricted in grief

Am sinking, melting like wax
Please catch me if you can
Or provide the punching bag.
I just want the words come alive in me!



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