Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 17, 2013 |
rhyming naani
Why War?
by dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I stand in defiance
Of an alliance Which despite compliance Would perpetuate more violence |
Recognized |
Naani
20-25 syllables in 4 lines
doesn't have to rhyme, however this one does
It greatly disturbs me to hear the news tonight which not only reports another mass shooting at a navel yard, but has our leaders still thinking if Syria complies with giving up their chemical weapons, we still need to send our missiles their way. Why do we continue to think violence and war is the answer to violence and war? It is a vicious cycle in which no one wins, we all lose.
Thanks to GaliaG for the Unknown Soldier Memorial in Poland.
Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. 20-25 syllables in 4 lines
doesn't have to rhyme, however this one does
It greatly disturbs me to hear the news tonight which not only reports another mass shooting at a navel yard, but has our leaders still thinking if Syria complies with giving up their chemical weapons, we still need to send our missiles their way. Why do we continue to think violence and war is the answer to violence and war? It is a vicious cycle in which no one wins, we all lose.
Thanks to GaliaG for the Unknown Soldier Memorial in Poland.
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