Satire Poetry posted September 4, 2013


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senryu

senryu (a beagle can sense)

by dejohnsrld (Debbie)

a beagle can sense
change in a woman’s mood--
men don’t have a clue



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Thanks to Mary D photography for the precious beagle

no offense to men, but my beagle can sense the slightest change in me and responds appropriately to make me feel better. Sometimes cuddling, other times throwing her toys in the air. Gotta love my girl, she has been with me through many tough times

senryu 17 syllables or less with satire, irony or social commentary



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