General Poetry posted August 11, 2013


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a twisted illusion

The Torment of If

by w.j.debi

"If" could change so many things
If only it were real.
Instead it's the height of fantasy
Marked by Torment's searing seal.

If I'd been right...If I'd been wrong...
If I'd only found the time...
If I'd hurried...If I'd waited...
If the talent for such were mine...

If I had money...If I had power...
If I could persuade mighty men...
If I were strong...If I were brave...
If I could do it all again...

If I'd listened...If I'd been kind...
If I'd only sensed your pain...
If you were here...If I were there...
If I could just explain...

Oh, how we curse Fate's meanness
When the end is tragedy.
A better outcome looms so near,
Although it can never be.

For we crave the happy ending,
So beautiful and sublime.
All it takes is one small change
To re-write the closing line.

Yes, "If" could change so many things,
Or so it makes us feel,
But it's just a twisting memory
Seeking to paint the Truth surreal.




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Thank you to Lorraine Purviance for the great artwork. I chose it because IF is the biggest fairy tale of all and as elusive as pixie dust.
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