| General Poetry posted July 29, 2013 |
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A woman so lonely and abandoned by her child
Invisible me
by Jackarrie
Lonely Poem Contest Winner
Invisible nothing but vague memories the loveliness of my youth gold has turned to grey eyes that once shone with ardent fervour now only shine with pools of tears sadness that won't leave like you did my Baby I love you oh how I need you to knock on my door give me your now grown arms make me visible again Please. Mom |
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Writing Prompt Write a free verse poem to express the state of loneliness in not more than 15 lines. |
Lonely Poem Contest Winner |
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This is a very real situation for many old people who the Grown children that never call or write to see how their parents are keeping, The loneliness is the worst to deal with.
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